Apologies :: Writing Education Themewriting Essays

ApologiesI cant apologize enough for this ugly piece of theme write. Yes, I admit it, I wrote a standard themewriting paper. I started with a cute little introduction with my thesis sentence at the end of my introductory paragraph. Once I established my thesis statement I backed it up with the three magical points that were neatly wrapped up in three short paragraphs. I ended with a brilliant stopping point that only did what a standard themewriting paper does, I restated my introduction and what I had state in the three paragraphs prior to the conclusion. The whole paper makes me want to throw-up. I could have handed in just my conclusion because it said what the rest of the paper did with less of a waste of paper. I should have known when I read the conclusion that the paper was dung but of course I didnt have the knowledge of expository 220 yet. I learned quite a dapple in the twelve weeks that the course offered. I learned how to use the web, how to write loyal exposition, and how to rip apart a paper that I thought was solid just twelve weeks ago. As I started to look over my paper the first thing that really popped out at me was my need to over-simplify everything. Instead of writing for a college professor my work looked more like a elementary school level expository assignment. I should have followed it up with a What I did this summer paper. I was embarrassed that I had wrote at such a level. My grammar was clearly not up to a university standard. Im not saying that to write guileless is wrong but I did so in such a way where, as I look at it now, I could have said a lot more to enhance the paper and really say it in a different manner. As I talk about the comfort of my former work Id also really like to state that I had a very over-simplified point. My metaphor for my university education has been over cliched enough already. I didnt offer anything new and really had no real meaning to my paper. Looking back at the assignment I realize now that I didnt model enough thought into what I was writing about, which really showed in my writing. I should have explored other metaphors before jumping into the first thing that popped into my head.